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Chapter 282

🕑 Added 2025-02-14 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Monadologist

I don't feel things are dragging on at all. I just think that we left a large cast of characters in the 190s, with one passing mention of Lily and co in 222 when she read a letter from our protagonist. Now we're in 282. So conservatively a third of the story has passed since we've seen the main cast. If you figure a "book" in serial form is roughly 100 chapters it has been approimately an entire book since we've seen them. Diving right back into a rich cast without taking a breath to remind the reader who they are risks losing anybody who takes a break in between, or who is following this in a more traditional published format. If I look at something like, say, He Who Fights With Monsters, which is being published as a series of books, one after another, despite starting (and continuing) as a web serial: After a gap that far apart, there's usually a subtle or not so subtle bit of reminder text when you re-encounter a character after that much of a delay, just so you aren't stuck trying to remember from context say, who was a redhead, and who was pushy, and who was a member of a merchant family, and which other person was a member of the proletariat or the daughter of the grand duke or whatever.

Tanner Lannister

I sometimes get to a part on patreon or rr and think it’s dragging and then have to remind myself that in a book this would be 30 minutes of reading and would be an awesome binge of a few chapters

Hamfist

Why not? Yes, he has a great perception skill but just before this it says he had to pulse it to find where they were sitting so he does not seem to have it activated. And whether it was running or not, his attention was 100% focused on Lily so not noticing her coming at him shouldn't be so hard to believe. He also wasn't running his body enhancement skill or any of his other combat skills so his ability to react wouldn't be much higher than any ordinary person.

Oskar

Thanks for the chapter 😁

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Reid Thompson

This is true, and i was annoyed by it then too

Hamfist

The may not have the right to be angry but when has that stopped them? Just look how angry they were at Aubrey for not telling them that Julius wasn't sleeping even though Lily and Edgar were both part of the conversation when Aubrey confronted him.

Hamfist

@meu 32 He is 14. His 12th birthday was when they did the ceremony that unlocked his system access and then he trained for almost 2 years training with Edwin before the attack. Most people think he is 15 or 16 though because of his tier, because he is tall for his age, and because 15 is the normal age for students to enter the academy.

Conrad Manaugh

Metal ball

Justin Drake

TYFTC

Daniel

😂 😂😂😂

Daniel

Meh, I feel he'd have to let Aubrey tackle him. But that he couldn't react in time?!?!

meu 32

Not really, it would be one thing if he was a full adult but you need to remember that he is still a child physically and socialy, even if he isn't mentally. They effectively have taken the role of older siblings and he basically got kidnapped then rather then coming back to them safe, decided to head out on his own into an extremely dangerous world, while, and I can't stress this enough, he is still a child. I don't remember his exact age but I think it's around 12, even if I am wrong and he is 16, which I am almost certain is not the case, it would still be justified for them to be angry. If my little brother did that I sure as heck would be.

uthr

First time dealing with women?

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter.

Oliver Reilly

"However, he better than anyone that her aura" should this be "However, he knew better than anyone that her aura "

Leonardo Krieck

To me, who only catch up a few chapters back, seems like not so long, remember them just fine. If this will be Inside the same book, no reasons to reintroduce IMO.

Reid Thompson

They don't really have the right to be angry. He let them know he was safe and alive, and he wanted to go on an adventure. That's his business. Getting mad at him for it is toxic af.

Monadologist

It is going to be a bit delicate reminding the reader about all these characters after spending so long away from them. Almost needs to be treated like character reintroductions in a new book/volume.

Orthneil Kelley Jr.

TFTC!

khalid ali

TFTC

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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