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Chapter 267

🕑 Added 2025-01-28 19:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Winterwolf

just let him write bro

Adrian Auriat

you have to give more power to julius or make this own more versatil because he just have fire and construction yes it is versatile but we know now constructions is just what it is possible to make of what is it. and he got his aura skill and body skill just 3 way of attacks. he can stop mid haire somebody it s cool but we know now. he has to have more moves. His moves are all cool and strong but it s not class. like i want to see julius take a fire form phoenix like and eat this enemy with fire so hot that the air change and all the things burn on their own like auto inflamation and he has to control this power more profondly like level moléculaire cantique like he stop particule with this kinétique power and boom frozen he can do so much more than just fire and all like this skill barrière of severance like what is used to power this skill like we know it come from this concept of sharpness and this is so cool like we just have to got a concept to have a skill base on nothing but what you do. like you play with water in a pool with mana and you got a skill water based without the element water in your core. Julius just have to have a concept of time and boom so good concept of time: dilatation of time

Thomas Grimshaw

edit sugestion: However, she found but if she concentrated and adapted the skill slightly, she was able to create small number, but very dangerous attacks with just compressed mist. ==> However, she found that if she concentrated enough she was able to adapt the skill slightly, creating fewer but more dangerous attacks with just compressed mist.

Raymond Mouton

Was re-reading the chapter just because, and found the phrasing here to be somewhat awkward: she was able to create small number, but very dangerous attacks with just compressed mist. => she was able to create small in number, but very dangerous attacks with just compressed mist. => she was able to create fewer, but more dangerous attacks with just compressed mist. Also here: with someone to clean the mess => with someone to clean up the mess

Daniel Hamilton

And we still have a shadow following Julius, ready to step in when things get out of hand

Corwin

Lol first can be debated at a later time. Time to secure the second

Amanda

Thank you for the chapter!! Lyn is so fun! Julius is so real for being depressed when she doesn’t want to continue fighting. It sounded like fun!

Voral

I'm seeing a lot of people not knowing the difference between shifting POVs while progressing a story and repeating a scene in multiple POVs. Guys, had the POV fully remained on Julius the whole arc (not only when the serious fighting began) would have been at most 1-2 chapters short, the plot isn't being slowed down, it's just not being shown exclusively from one side, had we got POVs of the same scenes from multiple character we would probably still be at Julius gunning down the ambushers's vanguard at best.

Usernames_are_annoying

TFTC

Jonathan

Lol let’s secure the first wife first.

greg

Well next one should be Godfrey PoV.

A B

Edit suggestion: The blast of energy, shifted -> The blast of energy shifted

Freya

Tyftc

Hamfist

If he's t5 then the only thing he needs in reserve is himself. But if he does then I imagine it would be obvious that a t5 is involved. And there should be a team of t5s from the marquis coming in as backup and to take control of the prisoners so he might leave if he senses them.

Cameron Taylor

Well, that should exhaust how many POVs we can see of that one battle.

Orthneil Kelley Jr.

TFTC!!! What an epic last few chapters!!!

TUSF

Or he's just a really high tier 4?

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Loved the fight scene.

Len

wooo Lyn POV! Chapter... the "bad" guys he fights are too nice-Lyn supposed Battle Crazed maniac from ~4? chapters ago is actually pleasant to talk to and reasonable? AARRRGGHHHH blow stereotype much? Good Fight Now the question is. how much does Godfrey have in Reserve-if anything- to commit to rescuing Crane and Lyn(and the rest of the crew) or does he abandon them all since apparently most of the Tier 4's are Defeated/Prisoners or Dead, Same for the Tier 3's and he was waffling before the attack to call it off.

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Tyftc

Corwin

Okay Lyn is now officially Julius second wife lol

Derek Walker

So Godfrey’s definitely tier 5 then, but it’s weird that he let the situation devolve to this. He was close enough to sense Julius’s attack and emblem, which means he’s close enough to have enough battlefield awareness of everything that’s happening.

William Johnson

Okay, so she's presumably scum given who she's working for but I like this Lyn woman!

Oskar

Tftc 🙂‍↕️

Zach

TFTC! Julius with the find of his twin 😭😭

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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