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Chapter 266

🕑 Added 2025-01-27 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Lance Wheeler

They got the party started!

Bosparan

definitely, not arguing that. My main worry here is not about her _being_ weak, but _appearing_ weak. A strong character that still needs to be rescued every odd week does not feel strong to me, even if she's in the 0.1% top performer category.

Oskar

Usually comes in around 5:30am

Oskar

Australia 🦘🦘🦘

Hufflepluffle

Morning!? Where in the world is that?

deus vault

well, everyone describes are as talented and capable. it's just that julious is a monster. also, she is not the mc, so obviously she won't be the strongest fighter.

Bosparan

Thanks for the chapter! I kind of hope, that once this fight is over and the journey concludes, we get a Dwarven Princess Rescue. Even if the princess is not a Dwarf ^^ Dwarven Princess Rescue: The princess gets abducted by the bad guys and the hero storms the enemy fortress to free her. The fortress is surprisingly ill defended until they finally reach the boss room / final area with a pile of corpses and an armed and free princess greeting them with a "What took you so long?" And with her growth weapon, she's basically equipped for that ... Anyway, if our princess _does_ end up the female lead - and it sure looks that way, something I appreciate - I really don't want her to be the perpetual damsel in distress. Matter of fact, I think Julius could use some getting saved by the lady to return the favor...

Cameron Taylor

I often drop stories due to multiple POV breaking the experience for me. But I can attest that these few POV switches aren't seeming problematic for me. They are following essentially the same narrative thread. They just convey the MCs current choices without the MC having a misguided inner narrative like he often does.

Len

NICE POV, Rolus is impressed with julius now..... i still want a Lyn POV... that said this bit needs a bit of something: He then placed the shackles on the man and watched as the activated with a surge of mana. The shackles were an expensive item and they showed why when they wiped out everything technique the man had been holding onto. maybe rewrite this to something like : "He placed the expensive enchanted shackles on the man, which upon closure on his wrists, activated with a surge of mana, wiping out all all techniques that the now prisoner had been holding onto."

Azulmar

For me its not how many but how the alt povs are handled. Short alt povs that focus on the MC usually work well and I've enjoyed these.

CheeseGrater

I personally like them.

Tom

I'm being picky, but we seem to have had way too many alternative POVs lately. This fight seems to be getting really dragged out.

nicolas

the man without legs that is trying to distract him, not the woman warrior

gray matter

That was good. Hopefully Rolus doesn’t get killed by Godfrey while he’s watching the fight.

Zack

I love that every battle maniac in this story has a sort of unspoken honor code to let each other finish their own fights without intervention if possible.

Derek Walker

Godfrey not interfering yet is interesting. Maybe he’s just not supposed to reveal himself, or he’s just holding out hoping the rest of his group weakens everyone.

Sarah Ott

The guy he just beat was trying to distract him so he wouldn't notice the woman.

Daniel Hamilton

Julius couldn’t help but appreciate the man’s attempt Shouldn’t that be woman?

Rallaster

24 more hours to wait! I'm so ready for the whole thing! Lol Tftc!

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

Oskar

Tftc, always looking forward to a new one each morning

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Good one. I can hardly wait for the next one.

Orthneil Kelley Jr.

TFTC!!!

Kevin McKinney

Great stuffs!

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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