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Chapter 251

🕑 Added 2025-01-09 19:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Reddit suggestion: don’t worry about you -> don’t worry about with you

Thaabit Rivertree

Its really refreshing to see their perspective and sincere concern for Julius. I especially like that it's in an intimate serting that we dont normally see. Just something that makes it feel like a more real, lived in world.

Ryan

I couldn't think of a better term at the time. But it stood out to me as well, something I will have to reconsider or change completely in the edit

Tucker Glick

Finally he has room for that cooking skills to temper the ruination aspect lol

Jachin Nelson

He's learned some aura techniques and other such things. He learned about concepts even if he could have done so else where. Honestly the 2 classes that I think are most important to him right now are the aura one, and funnily enough the combat one, since he'll learning how to operate in a group.

PatronTurtle

Not really. Many cultures all decided to name the planet translations of "earth" independent of each other. It seems pretty likely to name your home world on a word for dirt

Kanyau

Enough flags in this chapter to compete with the UN.

ThoMiCroN

At this point he should skip years. Aside from swordmanship he has little to learn from his classes.

ThoMiCroN

Even so, the entire expression suggests traveling in space.

PatronTurtle

I don't remember, what is the name for the planet? Do we know?

Zack

Thinking some more on Richard and Rebecca's conversation and how J is more than just single minded destruction, I wonder if his power set is headed towards a destruction & creation style. A warm hearth and blazing ruin all wrapped up in one. It would even mirror his phoenix concept quite well.

Kevin O'Malley

Tftc

Jachin Nelson

I'd prefer to see. Tournament arc, Julius does his normal down playing of his abilities, Edgar wins the Tournament but then challenges Julius to an exhibition match

Orthneil Kelley Jr.

TFTC!!!

uthr

"Copper for your thoughts." would work in this setting.

Petr Pavelka

“Earth to Richard” expression does not really fit fantasy setting of the story. I can’t think of better expression right now but maybe just describing that she started waving hand in front of his face would serve well enough.

Okyeah

Hey why doesn’t Julius use he’s arcane arsenal thingy with he’s barrier power

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Good to see some clarity regarding the others reactions to his skill.

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!

Corwin

Ruin Concept for chapter 253

Mitchell Calhoun

Yeah kinda feels like the last 4 chapters could have fit into 2. Or at least into 3. Shorter chapters with a little filler.

Rallaster

I was thinking the same thing last chapter and it feels like that with this one, too

Ryan

This one was about a couple hundred words shorter, but that was mainly because I edited some stuff out of it and placed it further ahead. So one of the future chapters will be a couple hundred over the normal.

Pierre Tadrus

Oh so many flags for Julius going berserk.

Mitchell Calhoun

I really hope he gets back to school at some point. I want to see a tournament arc where he slaps everyone around.

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

1FantasyFanatic

The “grizzled war veteran” description doesn’t make sense to me. I feel something like “miniature natural disaster” would vibe better.

DeathTick

These chapters are feeling far shorter tha usual, idk why

Usernames_are_annoying

TFTC. Julius already had a bunch of tragic stuff happen to him so I think he’ll be good unless all his friends die.

Hamfist

"The man laid an arm on his shoulder and said to Julius with a serious look. " The man said what?


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