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Chapter 241

🕑 Added 2024-12-28 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Hamfist

It is common in these stories for level ups to be held until exiting a rift/dungeon. Besides, chapter 243 does include the skill level ups so your point has no basis.

Allan Miller

Specifically, it doesn’t read like litrpg if the skill notifications are being “ignored,” they feel like an afterthought. I know it’s tempting to tell a story and not want to break out of prose to show a skill up, but if we’re going to get 10 waves over the course of 4+ chapters, it feels like the skill growth/familiarization should be emphasized with level up’s.

Allan Miller

The book no longer feels “skill centric”,

Kevin O'Malley

tftc

Hamfist

Spending time in rifts fighting monsters, gaining experience, getting stronger, gaining skill levels, possibly learning new skills. Are these activities a break from the main plot? Or are these core elements of "weak to strong, skill-centric" litrpg stories like the author has described this as being?

Hufflepluffle

My guess is that the reward will have a significant impact on the story, and that it will be based on developments he makes during the challenge.

Allan Miller

Tftc, but also, pacing is slowing down a bunch. I trust you have a plan, so this is just an observation and not a complaint, but I don’t currently understand what development character or otherwise taking time away from plot progression these past few wave chapters were supposed to achieve.

Hufflepluffle

Julius just didn’t think that this monster would have a skill like that. => Julius juat hadn't expected this monster to have a skill like that.

bart

why isn't he using the control skill to briefly immobilize the archers as they're about to dodge? seems to obvious solution to that problem

Corwin

Hmm maybe Julius should learn more about what makes a human human...the elements of carbon, iron, copper and many more. He could burn up arrows and merge them with blood and absorb them lol not sure how he would do that but that would be an interesting skill

PatronTurtle

If a group is linked like this and you aura-burn the one leader, will the burn spread along the connection to all the followers?

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. And btw: he could only shake his and slowly approach => he could only shake his (head?) and slowly approach scrapped him => scraped him

A B

Edit suggestions: scrapped him -> scraped him

Cory

Tftc

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!

Orthneil Kelley Jr.

Tftc

PikaAndrew

Tftc


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