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Chapter 222

🕑 Added 2024-12-05 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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PikaAndrew

Tftc

Ryan

Her family is merchant house, which means that their influence goes beyond politics. That was what I was hinting at.

Pickled Rick

It's already been 3-4 chapters since Julius decided he wanted to Tier up. Again it works in a book because you would read those 3 chapters in 20 minutes but when you come back every day for a chapter and he still hasn't tiered up its not as fun.

UnknownERRoR

Small ERROR i think The northeast was pretty far away from most of the Empire’s politics, but she had plenty of contracts (contacts?) there that would gladly help her keep a lookout for a certain troublesome boy.

PatronTurtle

Nah, it's a good break point to draw out tension. Grow your patience

Gerald Morris

Whoever made the suggestion this should be a POV chapter... THIS IS YOUR FAULT...sigh. anywho thanks for the chapter I really enjoyed it

ZeroL

“but she had plenty of contracts there that would gladly help her keep a lookout for a certain troublesome boy” contracts —> contacts No issue with a chapter like this unlike the previous comment. Things are still happening and we are learning new things, so it’s good. Keep up the good work!

Hamfist

The city where the school is located is on the east coast of the empire. When he found out where they had ended up it said he was pretty far north of the school. That puts him in the northeastern part of the empire.

Pickled Rick

This is one of those chapters that works better in a Book format when the next one is instantly available. As part of a 1 chapter a day release it just feels like an unnecessary filler chapter when the readers just want to see Julius tier up. This could have easily slotted in after the Tier up chapter.

Colin C

Not sure if i missed this but is he actually in the northeast region or is this a distraction because he knows exactly that they will start looking for him?

Azulmar

So mean! I was so looking forward to numbers going up today😋

Cory

Such a great story, I need moooore

Sipke van der Meulen

Tnx for the chapter, day 222 of writing without a break if i read it correct. That's effort. I hop you have time to get some buffer chapters so you can enjoy the holidays. Anyway, great story, love it

Zach

TFTC! Excellent POV, Julius is going to get his ass kicked when Lily finds him :)

RedLeaf

Thanks for the chapter!

Mantiqore

Someone's feeling dramatic

A B

Edit suggestion: "they couldn’t be further from the opposite" ( this would mean her family *was* cruel i.e. far from the opposite of cruel ) -> they couldn’t be further from it crumble -> crumple that is even alive -> that he is even alive

William Johnson

Julius is such a dumb *fondly*. Like man, right now you are super anonymous and wealthy on an individual level. If you want to explore the Empire just take a year off school and go backpacking. Every time you do something like galivant with the princess you risk raising your profile to the point that you can't rely on the anonymity of your low tier to keep major power brokers from targeting you because of who you know. I do appreciate his zero wisdom rizz though. Thanks for the chapter!

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Nice interlude, good to see what the others are doing/thinking. Still anxious for the Tier 3 goodness to come.

Kevin McKinney

Nicely done … it will be interesting to see what the bodyguard does …

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!

Profile Name

Tyftc. I’ve been looking forward to some of the people left in heston reactions.

Lukke Sweet

Lily is so protective ❤️

Voral

Sike

Sean

Couldn't be further from the opposite of cruel kind of means they're incredibly cruel. One of those double negatives. Basically to cancel our all those words the sentence says 'Could not be closer to awful'

Kevin Jalop

**First yo**

Voral

First


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