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Chapter 215

🕑 Added 2024-11-27 19:00:03 +0000 UTC

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PikaAndrew

Tftc

Jack Trowell

Her disguise is more than good, she looks and feels like a completely different person and the enchantment also has a mind altering effect distracting people thinking she might be the princess. And the story probably has not gone public yet or if it has it might just be known as "the princess disappeared in a teleportation trap in a rift"

Xepen

Well shocker, totally wasn’t expecting this development.

Dustin Riley

Where are chapters 213 and 214?

L Pedersen

Whatever. The point is that they have the clout to easily tell this woman to pound sand. But they didn't.

Sean

What plot are you referring to? If we were on the plot still he would've asked Reinera to use the beacon. Dude's just fucking around for now

L Pedersen

Seems like a distraction from the plot, Julius has better things to do.

Amazon Shopper

criminals is a b plot at most, not main arc-if it is its been a pretty bad arc so far. all the henchmen at first base dead after a single battle where mc converted their boss. if not for the looming "bigger orgonization" the entire storybeat would be long behind us

Amazon Shopper

good point, agreed

Amazon Shopper

there is no way the tier 5 nobel women doesn't recognize the princess- i get her diguise is good, but it would probably be kingdom wide news that the princess recently dissapeared, along with a male student(both at tier 2), and suddenly two people matching that description(general age, tier, and noble persuasion). at minimum she will quickly deduce it

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!

Zach

TFTC!! I just need all the inner monologues of these tier 4+ folks when Julius doesn’t get insta terrified - “who is this chaos spawn and wtf is backing him” Julius has also found the secret to his future married life with the princess - when in doubt, chocolate it out >>

Thaabit Rivertree

This is why they shouldnt have gone... what an ungrateful person

L Pedersen

I'd really love to see Jules and Reinera chose some goals or pick out a travel route for X reasons. "Y town is on the way back to heston, it has [insert interesting thing here] that I've always wanted to visit" This whole "lets just bum our way back and whatever happens, happens." is really not doing it for me. Other people have pointed it out but it really sucks to rob your characters of their agency. The high points of the story so far has been when Jules was first dumped in a dungeon after escaping from his house and being a badass at magic high school. Him being passive and pliant in the face of a much stronger person who's being ungrateful and unreasonable is just not fun to read. I really hope that next chapter has Jules or Reinera turning the tables on Rebecca in some way. I'm also starting to worry about pacing. This whole chapter was basically just one scene, introducing Lady Rebecca and their conversation. It felt very empty. Is Rebecca going to be a major character going forward? Important to the story? I guess time will tell. The chapter before that we met some people, ate some food, helped a traumatized boy. And before that we just travelled? I honestly don't remember it and it was only yesterday and the day before I read them. I guess we'll find out more tomorrow.

Pedro Sernagiotto

That’s really dumb. They did say mention nearly exactly what you told them to say, and the noble lady pretty clearly told them she wasn’t going to let them go and that they were prisoners a bit after. They can’t get out of there on their on with a Tier 5 right in front on them telling they won’t. And Julius mentioning who he is? At most that’s gonna make them get in contact with his House, and after that? Now his traitor family knows he is alive and where he is. At most they could say who the princess is, but they didn’t use the beacon for a reason, and if they feel the situation is bad they can still mention it later or just use the beacon. The dumb part here was going inside the estate at all. They could also mention some Tier 6 that helped them asked to not disclose anything about where he is secluded at, but that would risk angering the Elder or risk the noble family finding him and possibly create trouble between the two sides. Honestly they should have just said their goodbyes earlier and gone their way, now that it happened nothing of what you said would be a really good action to take .

L Pedersen

It's how passive he and Reinera are. He could have gotten out of this with words and not even a lot of words. "We brought your son back safe and sound Lady Rebecca but our secrets are our own and you have no right to them" If they firmly refused to cooperate, what would she do? Drag them handedly to the dungeons? Bring out the torturers? If she really did escalate they could just reveal who they are or even just Jules telling her who he is. She's not going to potentially start a conflict with another house of the same rank as her own. But no, they just nod and concede. I desperately hope we get some big dick energy from Jules or even Reinera in next chapter and this woman gets some comupance, her behaviour is disgraceful.

lilcapt

When Julius dealt withe the thugs that was attacking that couple he stole papers linking the two groups but didn't have the means to investigate. And both times he has he has interacted with criminal organizations the expositor mentioned a larger organization I wouldn't to be surprised if they were tied to an anti-Imperial organization that's trying to kill the princess

Sean

Get Cory hooked on his blindfold training, then explore teaching him about gases and liquids and whatnot. Could be a cool thing

Len

Freshmen- 9th grade- is usually 14/15(depending on when birthday was) age 13 would be 7th or 8th grade typically..based on my reading of the story, i'd say juls presents/acts like the 15-16 yrs old range i encounter in the stories i read-except for puberty stuff which you have not really gotten into-if he is 13ish then, heh heh heh, it's coming. i'm old but me at that age -range 13-16- was disgusting...especially around girls i had no clue how to act around girls, and once puberty hit...for a while there, by body was reacting at the WORST possible times...all the time. in school, at the mall,watching a movie etc anything remotely sexy by a girl would set it off for no bloody reason ok there was a reason-hormones-testosterone in my case- but it was damn embarassing esp in the early 1980's in the summer when everyone wore tight clothes. twas very noticable and uncomfortable.

L Pedersen

Why bother? The kid is really young, is he gonna be teaching him his letters and numbers? I hope they get out of this quickly.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Got to be careful with those Mama Bears…

ThoMiCroN

They are future contacts for the future Patriarch Julius.

Pedro Sernagiotto

Not gonna lie, I like the story but at no point Julius was anything if not dumb. He literally risks his life all the time, be it in fighting, training or annoying people were more powerful than him that according to common sense should have killed him for it a long time ago. He basically just goes with his guts on everything. “Obstinate fool” would be a pretty good way to describe him.

Kevin McKinney

Solid stuff. Wouldn’t lady Rebecca be concerned with the mana construct, too? Delayed bomb or such?

Kyfe

There hasn't been a connection to the Duke's house with these particular kidnappers, yet (though I see it coming, lol). Only the local Noble (Baron is noble equivalent of mayor, Count controls multiple baronies. I don't think the dude's rank was ever mentioned) at the town it happened in. The last thing we knew about the Duke was his family was moving in on Heston.

Kyfe

He's letting his 13 year-old self assert dominance. I believe that's how old he is. He's basically a freshman in high school, maybe younger (and he was never a responsible adult in his previous life, responsible being the key word). The real idiot in this situation is Danny, not putting his foot down to Cory and siding with the child in a bad idea. He's supposed to be a grown man.

Read Isekai

Is she going to be hiring some mind/memory readers? She's probably going to regret it if she does....

Connor Hinrichs

I'm not sure about the school. It has undoubtedly been useful to Julius, and the school absolutely has more to teach him, but right now the first year classes are skipable, so I think a little adventure is a good idea. He can go back second year and get an education that will be more useful at that time

lilcapt

If I were Julius I would be chomping at the bit for the teir three stage advancement

lilcapt

This does move the plot along we are finding out what is happening in politics and kidnapping not to mention that he found that these criminals are connected to the family that screwed his house over

Hayden Futch

Maybe I just have PTSD from too many stories where the main character loses all agency, and the story keeps changing in unpredictable and unsatisfying ways. I love the world and characters that you have built, so I'll try and suppress my frustration and just enjoy the ride.

Sean

I'm guessing he's going to be in an informal teaching position for Cory for a little bit now?

lilcapt

Power equals responsibility thus doing dumb things for the right reasons

RedLeaf

Angry mothers are the worst enemies!

Hayden Futch

You haven't let me down for 200 chapters so I'm going try and have faith in your vision for the story, but this seems so stupid to me. Why does Julius keep on putting himself in needless danger. It's feels like the smart protagonist that I have come to love has just taken a break this arc. Maybe I'll let the chapters build up so I can speed read through this part. I have high hopes for this arc where they are traveling through the world, just hope that it isn't a bunch of Julius being stupid.

Xiver

No good deed goes unpunished.

silder

Going to be honest, looking forward to them getting back to school or somewhere that moves the main plots along. Love the story!

Austin

Nice first


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