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Chapter 214

🕑 Added 2024-11-26 19:00:03 +0000 UTC

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ben russ

Average 7 year old is 4' 2", which to my 6'5" self has their nose at about hip height.

PikaAndrew

Tftc

Hajakuja

The way you’ve written Cory I assumed he was a three year old. Seven year olds don’t act like Cory does. Also seven year olds are much taller than someone’s legs.

Kevin McKinney

Yeah, but it just didn’t seem to mesh with the wording at the end … who saw who and when, etc.

uthr

“I don’t know what you are talking about,” Julius said with a grin, giving a quick glance toward the side of the room.

blarper

I would assume it’s much more for graces sake than his. He can’t really take credit without being “interrogated” by the nobles and I’m sure it would end up landing on her too and she’s shown she isn’t subtle or good at lying at all. Not to mention that lying might be useless against higher tiers anyway

Jayson J

I can't wait for Julius to meet Edwin again and have them talk about the experiences Julius has had and to find out that he's alive

blarper

This was me, I reread the chapter a few times before I found where it mentions julius glances around the room the first time he “denies” saving Cory. Idk, it’s kinda nit picky but I was definitely confused as well when I read that at the end of the chapter.

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!

el trucko

My arch nemesis Mr. Cliffhanger is back

Kevin McKinney

Thanks for the chapter … that last part was a bit confusing to me though, wasn’t sure who glanced where and who was visible to who.

Ryan

I did think about it and it was a coin toss. I saw reasons for doing both but ultimately decided on Julius not changing his name.

Zach

TFTC! Julius ultimate weakness - children and princesses begging, his poor mental health 😭

ambullseye

A suggestion (may not work depending on how you want to write the story / character) In Goldencrest he was 1 of a few hundred (thousand?) students so using his real name in day to day meetings with everyone made sense but as he is now "out in the world" he may want to use a fake name as Julius still (in theory) does not know the status of his house and if he is being hunted or if his uncle has survived. Now depending on how common the name Julius is and when he was dealing with random people (ie the orphanage and that T4 at kidnappers lair, i forget his name) the risk of interacting with someone who recognised him was minimal BUT in this situation where he is dealing the Nobility (guard and as he was aware of the lady) you may want him to use a fake name. This would mean asking the old guy from the orphanage to only share that fake name with Danny too, depending on how paranoid you feel Julius is. Not a big deal just figured to mention it as a option at least when dealing with the nobility. as the saying goes "there are no secrets in politics". this suggestion probably speaks more to my paranoia than anything in the story 😛

Noah

Why would he not want anyone to know? This is a perfect opportunity to start building the connections/favors he needs to take back his house. Rescuing a stolen heir to a Marquise is a pretty major accomplishment. He doesn’t have to tell them who he is. He just has to introduce himself now without a family name, and then when he needs the help of a major noble House he can return, introduce himself for real, and ask for help. He already has a super strong relationship with multiple powerful families through his classmates and is good friends with a foreign heir to a powerful kingdom. If he continues to build his connections then he’ll have too many powerful friends/allies for anyone to deny his side of the story about the attack on his house. Especially because he also has personal connections to multiple tier 6+ people with the Space Mage lady, the secretive crafting dude, and the orphanage.

Kyfe

Sneaky wives... in a good way, lol.

PatronTurtle

Minor verbiage critique: you tend to use "you guys" in a lot of places, and it feels awkward that so many people in-story use it, even across different social standings and formality situations

RedLeaf

Thanks for the chapter!

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Good hand-over scene.

Itsigu

Tftc!

Bing Lun

Tyftc, ma boy about to get another favour

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Tyftc!

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TFTC


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