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Chapter 82

🕑 Added 2024-07-04 14:31:10 +0000 UTC

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Edit suggestions: begun to -> began to was not sitting in -> was now sitting in (?)

Steven

Good chapter. I’ll eco some of the other comments. It felt bland at the end. As a reader, these type of chapters should be written extra long. Can’t stand when authors stop in the middle of something big. Anyway, loving the story!

hachetnif

Yeah I thought he was going to infuse his aura into his body too or something similar

Jamie Idle

I was really hoping something unexpected or interesting would happen during his advancement. This felt more anticlimactic

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Glad to see he reached Tier 2. Interesting to have Professor Youma’s POV, kind of wish there was a bit less discontinuity with the previous chapter here, an extra sentence or two at the end of the previous chapter to close out the class and then head to the room for advancement would not be out of place.


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