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Chapter 66

🕑 Added 2024-06-19 19:23:56 +0000 UTC

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Kyfe

I imagine his commentary is coming from comparing him to the others around him, the fact he was moved up, and common sense. Understanding having a few simple moves in one form of combat he's proficient in, namely Unarmed, easily translates to other weapons and forms. It's not much of a stretch for him to recognize it.

_mori

For someone who’s only recently bothered picking up a sword, it seems pretentious for him to comment on someone else. I’m not trying to attack your writing or anything, but that opinion of Julius’ was entirely unsubstantiated. It just seemed like copy and paste of other media. Simple swing = strong. I have no idea whether that’s true or not and I’m not arguing the validity, but Julius himself seemingly appraising a skill that he knows very little of, is pretentious. Or it comes across as such at least. I would recommend giving that line to a different character. Maybe someone having a conversation with Julius while they both observe the guy?


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