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Chapter 52

🕑 Added 2024-06-12 17:11:12 +0000 UTC

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Aaron

Minor edits: It was funny to see Rae get all aggravated on his part. - 'on his behalf' instead? But it was nice to see Rae all heated up on his part. 'on his behalf' or 'for him'? Interestingly enough, while Declan hadn’t heard of Gabriel Keller, Orus did. 'Orus had.' Julius went up to his room and gave the spirit seed some mana, the little thing was hungry as ever, devouring the mana. - 'some mana. The little' Admittedly it was taking in a lot of mana so it would make sense. - 'so it would make sense' - this might read better with that omitted.

Ryan

I feel the same way, I just want to get him settled in before I introduce more complexities. Hopefully, it won't be too long.

Sean

I hope we hear something about his family soon. I like the Academy stuff but it's killing me not knowing whether he's hiding from his elder or if his Uncle survived.

Raymond Mouton

Agreed

John

Thanks for the chapters. Absolutely love this book so far! Need more chapters ASAP lol


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