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Penitent Ch 18: Grit

🕑 Added 2025-02-28 20:03:33 +0000 UTC

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Beeees!

Michael is gonna be such a beast. Able to run for hours in full plate while healing any injuries he takes

Beeees!

My own dumb brain does the same sometimes and I gotta reread. Getting better at it as the story goes on tho

DAGr

On the same note of things being confusing, I tend to mix up Marcus and Michael due to their names starting with the same letter. I realize it’s all my own retardation, but it’s a fairly common thing most authors avoid or learn to. Though it’s not nearly as bad as Jake and Jacob, for example. I also realize it would be a bit of a pain in the ass to rename Marcus, and it’s really not a big deal all around.

Nifty

Lights in the barracks went off is confusing, id change it to came on instead


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