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kaien’s eclipse pt 10 (A)
🕑 Added 2024-07-19 20:41:03 +0000 UTCi’m enjoying writing tobio and kaien’s father-son dialogues a lot more than expected!! 😙😙 tobio is such a matter-of-fact person while kaien is a more abstract feeler. 🫨 tobio is concise with his speech which helps kaien see things a lot clearer, while kaien’s no-filter teenage rambling helps tobio figure out where all his struggles are directed towards, while giving tobio time to map out his train of logic! 🤚🚧🚂
this was another extremely tough chapter to write bc i had to really sit down and talk to my younger self for hours lol… 💀💦 then figuring out what kind of advice tobio would give as an adult from not just his own personality, but also how he would deliver said advice that wouldn’t sound too OOC. 😭😭😭 hopefully it delivered smoothly for your reading!!
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Öcü 🦊
i was originally following this comic on your ig and it’s been such a fun time reading all your comics from the start again here! i’m love love lovinggg Nao and Kaien’s dynamic as they start to reconnect and i think you depict their internal monologues so so well! (also love all the other love-children making appearances haha) and now it’s papayama’s turn to shine as he deserves🥹 he’s just so thoughtful and soft and to see him being the amazing dad he is just makes me soo emotional T-T i CANNOT wait to see how the rest of this beautiful story will go (whenever you’re ready ofc!) and thank you soo much for all that you’re doing on here! <3
Sakura Hime
Sooo good, I hope it's gonna continue soon 🥹
Andrea Rizo
Im re-reading this comic bc I miss kaien so much 😭😭😭
Angie
you have no idea how much I love Papayama 😭❤️ Tobio is my sweetheart and him being a good dad just feels so right. thank youuu
erencito
im gonna cry with this bonding i love tobio so much i love seeing him being loved and cared for 😭
Vanessa N
I’m living for the papayama and Kaien dynamic here. Kaien presents as a ball of sunshine, but clearly has so many of the socially stunted qualities that Tobio has. He’s just a bit better at hiding them behind the sunshine mask. His reaction of wanting to notice those moments NOW is so real, so in character for him. I live for the ending where Kaien calls Tobio out on putting up walls as much as Tobio calls him out on it.
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VERSION A IS SOOO GOOD. I personally enjoy the flow and order of that one more. to go from "there is no right answer" to "just the right ppl" etc. If we're talking about parallels to past kageyama, I feel like version a puts an emphasis on the ppl and their impact on kageyama's change. I feel like introducing these ppl and them talking about how they made kageyama feel safe has a nice flow to it. I also like how kaien asks how do u know if it's that moment. It reminds of "the moment you get hooked on volleyball"
Sash
This really resonated
binosaur
THEY ARE SO PRECIOUS 😭😭🫶🏽🫶🏽 love seeing kageyama reflecting on his experiences to help kaien
Tessa Larson
The PARALLEL AND FRAMING of Tobio in the present and Tobio in the past makes me EMOTIONAL 😭❤️
ni 🎀
f-finale ⁉️⁉️
KamikazeKay
Tobio is such a good father🥹
Nana
I need more explanation, Tobio! XD I also need more of Kaien ♡ And Kanae is so cuuuute, sleeping in her daddy arms **
roxas !!
i CRIED
Wanda is reading
EXPLAIN MORE YAMA PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
Chanel Gravier
I love him 🥹💙
Krystal
THE FLASHBACKS 😭 😭 😭 KARASUNO & KITAGAWA TRIO MY BELOVED😭😭😭 this was SUCH a great read!! thank you so much!!
LJ
You did SUCH a good job with the dialogue. It felt really in character, especially matched with his body language and blushing! Like I heard is in his voice. Perfect. Kaien, you've got two really awesome Papas. Can't wait to hear what Sho adds!!
Konichita
I adore this conversation with Tobio. I think you are doing a great job of handling his character!!!
FlameGreyWolf
Oooo will we get more glimpses into how To io fell into that booby trap 🤣🤣
fad
ohhhh the flashback panels to karasuno….. his first time meeting hinata……. i feel insane
mist (sinz)
I love them 🥹✨
Madeleine Magallanes
The haikyuu characters look so pretty in your art style
jimin = shoyo
finale?? 😧😧
Emptee
Papayama caught in 4k, but ugh the father son feels are never ending
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Silver fox Sakusa and Tobio are those ride or die’s with a sunshine partner. Also, random, I think papayama has a point. And Kaien’s been caught in 4K. 😱🤪🥹🙌🏼
K✨
sobbing😭 I love them sm
Leia
Tobio’s blushing 🥹 Such a soft moment between them
LeeTaeRyeo
KageHina story arc? 🤩 But I love Tobio giving advice like this. He's been there and knows what it's like. So, this is experience speaking.
atsuoiomi
sobssss papayama is so cute 🥹💞💞💞💞 loving this so much!!
kerol
TOBIO GETTING SHY AOSKAOSKAK these pages were so precious, ally 😭🤏🏻 it's nice to know you get to work on yourself when building this story ;a; it's not easy being a late diagnosed adhd. thank you for all your effort and care and for sharing it all with us 😭💕
Heydwb
Love the update, but tsukkis lil pout was gold! ☺️
jups
kindaichi, kunimi and kags 🥰🥰
Georgia21
“You feel safe” oh Tobio🥺
mitigates
his healing era 🥺🖤
VampyrSutton
Not the booby trap 🤣
BlossomFall
OMG TSUKKISHIMA IN THE BACKGROUND
Monica
“He made a boobytrap so perfect that I fell in and couldn’t get out” that’s the most creative way to describe falling in love I’ve ever read and I LOVE IT!!! PAPA TOBIO I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!! 🥺💙 the lil images from different moments in his life…Kaien’s expressions!!! TOBIO UNDERSTANDING HIM SO WELL!!! IM CRAWLING ON TJE FLOOR I LOVE THEM SO MUCH!!! Thank you for the update Ally!!! 🥹💖
Noelle
This is perfection!
Jess MCR
PLZ THIS IS SO!!!! Also Papayama doing the adulting 😭 incredible 10000/10000 would recommend
Princess
Tochannn 😭😭😭 i need you to explain plss don't stop there
Zina
'You feel safe' KAGEYAMA TOBIO MY HEART 💗💗💗
Katie Gering
Wait… finale? ☹️
sotito
MY BABIES I LOVE THEM SO MUCH
aerith
SUGA😭😭😭😭😭😭
dianne
this is so sweet 😭😭 and i love seeing other karasuno boys in your style!! ❤️
chlo
kaien is so very dear to me😭😭😭😭
