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Subject 7: Part 3

🕑 Added 2024-02-12 05:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Alexia

I like your revision version! 👍 About bringing fresh reasons for a forced or unwilling change, I was quick to realize I was unable to do so. 😊 Instead, I had a look on some of your past stories and tried to annalyse them. My conclusion is that we don't really mind if the reason is new or not, what matters is how it fits with the story. The consistency is everything, and it's not only a matter of storyline, the atmosphere of the story is also part of it.. Let me illustrate below. Note that I have used Chat GPT to edit my thinking. It has done so in a style a little bit bombastic and convoluted, but I rather like it. 😊 Brother Bewitched': The change is initiated by the main character's rival to strip him of his male power. This act of transformation is a strategic move to eliminate the protagonist's influence and status, effectively using his newfound vulnerability against him. 'Men Proud and Pretty': The transformation is conducted by aliens with a clear intention to convert virile men into very feminine versions of themselves. This could be part of a study on humanity or even a form of entertainment. The specific reasons remain ambiguous, but the aliens' actions are consistent, resembling those of methodical experimenters. 'Squaw' (title uncertain): The change is triggered by supernatural forces once the characters enters a haunted territory. The male character's guiding spirit is a butterfly, whereas the female's guardian spirit is a wolf, necessitating their transformations accordingly. My guess is that the male was previously unable to protect and care for his girlfriend adequately, prompting the supernatural intervention to correct this imbalance. Though not explicitly stated, there is a subtle yet poetic logic underpinning the narrative.

Taylor Galen Kadee

I do not disagree that the motivation for the feminization doesn't make sense. I didn't really realize how much it didn't make sense until I had already published Part 1 and was working on Part II. I agree with you that the stories are more enjoyable is the plot of consistent. It's a flaw in my method of releasing things as I go that I often regret certain decisions when it is in some ways too late to change them. This happens often with the longer works. In the case of Subject 7, my plan is to go back and revise Part I to make everything line up more perfectly. I'm going to make it a little bit of a Handmaid's Tale sort of situation where the galaxy is short of breeders, but women are in charge of things so they decide to experiment to see if they can turn men into the needed breeders. This will also speak to the selection of the man with old fashioned values as they are speculating that once he finds himself female he will feel obligated to do his duty and have babies for the good of the state. I am, however, quite interested in your ideas. After so many years and so many stories, it is hard to come up with fresh reasons for a forced or unwilling change.

Alexia

This episode hooked me and I bet I will find the rest of the story enjoyable. However I have something to say about the purpose of the feminization, as explained in the first episode: it doesn't have a lot of sense, IMHO. If really the army wanted to fight sexism, they could have found better way to achieve it than turning their tough macho soldiers to girly girls that are of no use in battle. All the contrary, the army should promote traditional male value of roughness and self-reliance in soldiers of both sex. You will probably tell me that it doesn't matter, that it is just the a pretext for a nice feminization story. Maybe so. But IMO, the story works even better if the plot is consistent. And you can find hundred of ways to justify a girlification process that are both consistent and stimulating for the imagination. You have done this successfully so very often in the past. Would you like me to remind you about your best finding in this department? Or maybe you want some new suggestions, if I can find any?

Taylor Galen Kadee

This is also one of my favorite themes, so you can be sure there will be more. Glad you like it!

PV

Not sure if you plan to make more but I really like these slow burn transformations/ male breast expansion but def really liking these stories!

Taylor Galen Kadee

Glad you like it! I guess the plus of missing the first few is now you get to catch up!

Belle

I can’t believe I missed this when it first came out! I like this!


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