Brother Bewitched 30
🕑 Added 2024-01-12 07:04:48 +0000 UTCAfter losing his virginity as a female, Serren suffers regret and confusion. Nemeria determines to get to the truth.
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Taylor Galen Kadee
Hey, Joseph-- remember, it was not just a night with a man. It was a night with Devin! The next chapter will be out Friday. Now that I have my computer back, I am getting the last shots done, then edit... edit... edit...
Joseph c guillory
Wow a real shocker one Night with a man and she's a different person Great story as always but please tell me when the next chapter is coming out.
Taylor Galen Kadee
LOL! I will do my best.
Alexia
Let's assume you have a good fashion sense. It cannot be otherwise, it's your duty. For your stories, your characters and your audience.
Taylor Galen Kadee
Thank you so much.
Joe Blow78
great job
Taylor Galen Kadee
Thank you!
Taylor Galen Kadee
As for the dresses, two things. 1. I am not known for my fashion sense! 2. What I didn’t like was as much the way it renders. I felt the pleat like lines on the skirt looked odd in particular, so it was more not liking that more so than the dress itself. I was drawn to it by those multi colored puff sleeves.
Taylor Galen Kadee
Well, thank you very much! I do spend a bit of time on the poses and facial expressions!
Taylor Galen Kadee
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Neha Raj
Awesome as always. Love your work Taylor.
Alexia
Nemeria and Serenina look was OK in this episode. Very feminine. IMO, Serenina's dress, hairstyle and make up was the best since a while. So I was surprised by Serenina's derogative comment about her dress..
Alexia
Yes. The dialog was enough. I 100% agree with findesiecle. 👍 Also Serenina manierisms speak a lot. The way she plays withe her hair or look at herself in the mirror, all that says 'girl' whatever she is saying herself at that moment.
Kathleen collins
Bravo! Cannot wait for the next one!
Taylor Galen Kadee
Thanks. I resisted the urge to have the narrator explain everything and hope the words were enough. Looks like they did the trick!
findesiecle
Blurring the meanings of yes and no, playing at games of the heart, reaching out to a guy who is "just a good friend", feigning virtue with a confidant and wanting to "spice up" what is reflected back in the mirror... As, I stated before, I enjoy it when the personality changes really start to kick in. Loved it!