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Brother Bewitched Chapter 35

🕑 Added 2024-04-06 12:10:37 +0000 UTC

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Taylor Galen Kadee

Happy Birthday! Check your email!

Joseph c guillory

April 21

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April 21

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Taylor Galen Kadee

LOL on the boob shot! What day is your birthday?

Joseph c guillory

You know, I have expected you to make a picture of her breast popping out of her shirt begin large at first. Good chapter. By the way, I'm having a great week. Myself It's my birthday soon.

Taylor Galen Kadee

If it is any consolation, I do believe I will be doing a mermaid story soon!

Joseph c guillory

Great story, but I was still hoping for He become an elf or a mermaid

Taylor Galen Kadee

Awhile back I started buying mermaid related assets whenever they were on sale, so it could happen!

Tungdil91

I hope so! We need more mermaid stories :)

Taylor Galen Kadee

lol!

Alexia

Yes you are right: Be glad we have noticed. It shows that we are in the story 😊. Next time, instead confessing you were tired, just say you did so on purpose as a test to know if we are attentive... 😊

Taylor Galen Kadee

I can't get away with anything! I did try and skip over putting a shot or two of her in there just because I was exhausted and wanted to be finished. I even thought at one point-- I hope no one notices. Well, I appreciate that people do notice. Will go back and add a shot or two. She was actually invisible waiting for Asryn than appears behind him and casts the spell.

Taylor Galen Kadee

Interesting observation and comforting. I have wondered sometimes if I was over using certain settings-- a lot of the action takes place in Serren's room! However, I do find Serren's room a pleasing setting to shoot and it also makes sense to me.

Taylor Galen Kadee

I am glad you like Asryn's new look. Maybe Serren will even be a little jealous? Pattenia most certainly wants to show off her Asryn, so we will see her out and about.

Alexia

Aaah, I forgot: where is the witch who casted the transformation spell? Hidden behind the curtain?

Alexia

At this point, the story follows 2 of the 3 rules of the french classical theater: unity of place and unity of action. Unity of place because everything occurs in Serenina's camera and unity of action because the story is centered on Serenina's forced wedding. I am pretty sure my comment will be interpreted as asking for more locations in the story but it is absolutely not the case: I like classical theater 😊

Alexia

Things turn well indeed between Serenina and Devin. ♥️ Asryn had became very cute. It seems that her hair has darkened during the change. Now he has beautiful hair, as black as Serenina's hair are blonde. I hope that as a serving girl, she won't be stuck in the kitchen but that she has to go sometime in Serenina's camera for her duty. It would be interesting to get some interactions between the transformed Asryna and Serenina. It would be also interesting if Devin meet the new Asryna.