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A party worth going to.

🕑 Added 2020-01-22 13:50:29 +0000 UTC

Comments

Crystal

So are we just gonna ignore that the room is filled with cum if all the guests had a tf like that?

Daniel Haggarty

I honestly love your style and work ethic and universe. You are right up there with Black Shirt Boy in art quality. But BSB and Grumpy (and tbh Grumpy needs work on their consistency and technique) are dominating the process sequences right now. If you could break into that level of tf-process creativity your art would be better than BSB's.

Daniel Haggarty

Dude, I hate to say it, but you are in a sequence rut. Mix up the process a little bit! As much as I love your style and characters, the process is the same every time, just initiated by a different object/event. Change up the process, leave the character wearing male or tattered clothes. Don't have the character cum every single time during the process when they lose their dick. Maybe have them squirt their leftover semen from their new female equipment? Maybe make their dick just super leaky. Maybe do a left --> right sequence, where they are female on the left for an uncomfortable amount of time. Maybe make the nipples ejaculate or lactate. You've got great creativity in your paycomics! Bring that same creativity to your 1-pagers!