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Chapter 323: Planet Poaching

🕑 Added 2023-11-25 17:42:01 +0000 UTC

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Gavriel

"the mortal way", eh?

Sean Dunning

Couldn't put it down! Thanks Valerios, keep them coming! My only hope would be don't let the earth based characters be used as hostages, I wanna see Jack unencumbered. If his kid or girl are stolen, the fist would be conflicted 😆

James

Congrats on finishing it mate. It’s nice to see an author who gets so immersed in their books. Enjoy the break after a job well done.

Michael Meyer

I personally think that seeing him find a way to exploit system boundaries or something of the like would be cool. not necessarily to become overpowered, just more like amplified meditation. copy jack seeing the real world? anyhoo, this book felt really good to read, and the end was quite satisfying. i wouldn't even be that mad if you ended the series here. thank god that there are no serious cliffhangers.

EsZeus

Very good one. Well done 👍

Jumping Flounder

yea i’m really feeling like the sage being jack might hold some water.

Melody Haren Anderson

Amazing end. I think it'd be interesting for you to explore Daos that the system crushes similar to Edgar's. I feel like the professor should get one that is... Traps almost feel like a good root for a tree she grows. Since that's what she does, creates and dismantles traps of armies clashing. Analysis or understanding feels like the core of her Dao.

Knight Rhoden

Man, what a god damn amazing read! Never have I read about a protagonist who acts a man and lays it all on the line like Jack Rust, and this is only the beginning of his journey into the greater universe too! I hope one of the first things to come out after the break is the Animal Kingdom POV and how utterly devastated they are from the crippling losses of face and internal morale Jack has inflicted on them. They lost two C-Grades, one to the Hand of God and one to Jack himself, their morale in their D-Grades was shattered when Maximus Lonihor was slaughtered, and they just lost a planet altogether. Black Hole Church interference or not the Animal Kingdom's enemy factions must be drooling at the mouth to pounce on poorly manned frontiers, perhaps people are even leaving the faction in shame? Rebels are emboldened? And of course the Hand of God is undoubtedly pissed off at them, so will they even receive support now if the other factions decide to gang up on them? Will we perhaps see a B-Grade Faction be destroyed for the first time? How bleak must the situation be for the average Animal Kingdom cultivator now? If one of them walks into a bar will members of other factions sneer and laugh at them for daring to show their disgraced face? Can't wait for the rest! Thanks for the chapter!

Namorat

A wild ride and I enjoyed every moment of it. Here's to many more stories in this world. Have a great time off ^^ Personally I would love to see a Dao of Books or Reading, but I am not sure if you would enjoy this as much as I 😄

Albadia

A great end to a great book! So good to finally see jack take out the overseer! Enjoy that much deserved break, and get those juices flowing for the next one!

Daniel Rodrigues

Pretty sweet start to the weekend. I thought it was a good ending to the book. Have a good break👍👍👍

Firinen

Of course we want to see him breakung into C Grade! While it is nice that Jack becomes a father I would like him to keep progressing at around his current speed while of course being an acceptable father.

Greg Lambert

Great job. Looking forward to whatever comes next. This was a great arc! Enjoyed it. It felt very satisfying to reach this conclusion. Looking forward to animal kingdom and galaxy POVs in the next book.


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