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Chapter 168: Space Ring

🕑 Added 2023-04-18 17:36:00 +0000 UTC

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Kevin McKinney

Well … darn …

IndyBart

Feels kind of bad that the known crappy overloaded do crappy stuff and instead of blaming them for their crappy actions you turn around and blame somebody else that is also a victim of their crappy attention…. Feels forced, maybe there is a redemption arch there because it’s not like Jack needs more enemies to create drama.

Valerios

Oop, you're right. I'll fix that and let you all know in tomorrow's chapter. Thanks!

BluEarth

"The Hand of God. They’re the ones supplying the torch baskets at every exit tunnel" How's that work with them being anti-Ancient and our peeps leaving the 3rd ring from a secret Ancient ghost town. There were torches in that exit tunnel, right?

Kris Boxall

Thanks for the chapter! I’m surprised Vlossana blames Jack and not herself at all considering she knew he was on the run and kept the secret for him

Nanooki12

Grimderp strikes this story again where nothing is allowed to be OK.


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