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BK1 Chapter Forty-Four

🕑 Added 2023-07-09 17:51:34 +0000 UTC

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I have a good ending planned for book one, which we are getting to. Sadly people don't gain strength emotionally so quickly, but a lot of the improvement physically and mentally will be the main focus of book two.

Lazy Minx

I’m just gonna go ahead and say it. I think this needs a time skip. The story is interesting but what holds it back the most is that every chapter feels like a cliffhanger where Garret is somehow, someway causing problems. It is slowly reaching the point where it no longer creates tension and instead creates tedium. I know this is supposed to be an uphill battle for her, but it’s now 44 chapters in and I find myself wanting to actually see her in a state of improvement and not just struggle.


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