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Chapter 12 - Points of View

🕑 Added 2023-08-31 19:09:19 +0000 UTC

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Oh man. A confused reader is the bane of any writer. I probably made it unclear, but everyone in the world knew what was coming. Everyone had a timer in their vision. That being said, the father is going to go through his own arc. Being a good CEO doesn't make you a good hands-on leader. As fucked up as Logan and Malcolm's relationship is, family is family. And I definitely wouldn't want to fend for myself in an unknown jungle with monsters about. Both of their patience is running low, and they WILL keep butting heads :D They're both idiots at this point in the story

mathieu brassard

I'm a bit confused. Malcom made it sound in earlier chapters like he knew something was coming. Was he just blowing hot air and being a one dimensionnal evil CEO? If he is the Most Valuable, he should have realised Logan would not roll over and become a henchman. Would it be me, I think i'd take the risk without dear daddy and take off with Freya and if she'd not follow, she'd not be worth my time or suspect been paid off by dear old dad (all that implying that Logan should realise he hold all the cards and can't be stopped by them)


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