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Chapter 110 colorless

🕑 Added 2023-08-29 12:59:34 +0000 UTC

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M.D.Syl

Thanks! <3 The different perspectives are a little harder for me than the main character's PoV, I need to do a whole shift in mindset for it and find the right inspired moment to get it right. I didn't do that originally, and one of my earlier beta-ish readers suggested that it'd be nice to get another PoV, I tested it and ended up liking the results. I'm happy you're enjoying them. I got very mixed feedback about them, but I guess it's up to people's taste. And yeah, these are things Marisha has no way of knowing about, which does add a little life to the world.

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I love the different perspectivs. We know that Salik was slowly worn down by Zoe and very reluctant to sleep with her but from our main characters viewpoint she can't possibly know that. Also poor Berthold is gonna have a bad time if he ever finds out about Sharlas true nature o.o


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