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The Bet - Chapter 25

🕑 Added 2025-11-15 22:32:58 +0000 UTC

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Sissy Denise

It just occurred to me... Curious how long the bet would have taken had Zane not used some tricks... Such as the beta version of freaks n sheets to wear Dan down, or getting Leah to be an accomplice, or her assistant to give Zane the goods of Claire's schedule and cracks in her mental armor.

Sissy Denise

I just wanted to share. Your two series, The Bet and Cumbunny have probably caused me to cum about 20 times at this point. In some cases 2-3 a day. The only other time a story has impacted me this hard was a guy on reddit named Bridgekicker (now deleted) who wrote another bet story called "I lost my wife to a football bet". He has a other one called "my crude boss cucks me". The difference being, his stories the husband is basically involved from the start but still gives in. Anyways, I love your writing and it definitely unlocks something inside me

Tickr

Agree. For so much focus on the website at the beginning it’s now disappeared.

PufferFish

Well, what if the husband has already accepted? Claire asks Dan for a tattoo thinking that's the way of escaping Zane, but Dan gives her a Zane tattoo, or they trace over the henna one to make it permanent... or, gasp, they didn't use henna.

MM

It seems late to be introducing a new character but maybe it'll give Claire an option other than Zane for her cheating.

Deprivedone

She did finger herself while performing the blow job I'm pretty sure.

Sissy Denise

I chose it, cause it would show she still has some fight in her, even if that fight is ultimately pointless with Zane winning in the end. As I noted earlier in a comment, technically speaking, none of this has been cuckolding by standard definitions... It's been cheating. Leah has made Dan think he might be a cuckold via her talk and he might think it's a turn on to envision Claire with Zane... But as far as Claire and Dan are concerned, this bridge hasn't been crossed... He thinks she is still a loyal wife. She pretty much failed like 2 weeks into the mission. On one hand, Dan should lose her period, Zane wins. On another, converting Dan to a willing cuckold is also hot

alexander

Can't wait for Zane to permanently mark her. A tattoo would be so hot!

Randy T

Yep - I kind of thought that (rebellion not necessarily being successful, and in some ways ending up being part of the submission) was already seeded with Zane's 'training' sessions with Leah, and the way he thought positively about Claire's attempts to confront him in earlier chapters - the end of one of the parts in the middle of the story so far was definitely this (the section where Zane thinks "Game over" before one of the polls - can't remember which one/can't be bothered to look it up right now, lol).

Rabble Laid

For those concerned about the direction of the story, let me give you a little bit of my perspective without spoiling too much. If you are concerned about spoilers, stop reading now! Rebellion from Claire does not necessarily imply that such a rebellion will be successful. In fact, to me, it is a sign that Claire is realizing how deep and fast she is falling. It is one last gasp trying to resist her ultimate fate. As far as leasing toward the end, I estimate the finale to be 4-5 chapters away. I hope you all enjoy the ride!

Sam Laliberte

Last chapter was nothing burger, and a chapter wasted on a bj. Just like silver and mad stories, ran out of imagination. Done spending my money on them and on this.

Notreallife13

Please do not let the husband get her a tattoo or piercing. Totally fine with that option winning and then coming to acceptance about his cucking. But he shouldn't get to mark her - she's Zane's now.

Steve G

It looks like more oeople want Clair to rekindle her marriage with Dan than the other choices. I did not pick that option because I felt it would be too depressing. Dan simply cannot fill the void in Claire's life that Zane has exposed. She needs the dominant prick, and her efforts with mild Dan are going to bring that home to her painfully.

Minty

The options from the last chapter haven’t been addressed in this chapter which was short and seems to create more drama than progressing to the next stage of Claire’s journey

ZEE MEDIA

Lol ikr? Silver is really good at writing, but we all jist wanna see the conclusion to sarah and lester, likr cmon

ZEE MEDIA

Lol, whats funny is you get these kind of people in every cheating/hotwife stories, didnt have a problem in the start and enjoyed it, but when its nearing its conclusion, theyll whine and say 'oh im worried about the marriage' or 'where is the connection between the couples', 'they dont interact anymore, this is far from reality'.... bitch please its fiction and you know exactly what the story is going to be about, and you read it anyway, if you want it to be reality then go out and make your own reality, jf you are reading this, then just enjoy the fiction, and stop whining

Sissy Denise

As hot as this series has been, I worry her marriage to Dan could effectively be over if she continues, even if he is showing his cuck tendencies. A cuck is a man who knows his partner is sleeping with others, approves of it, and enjoys the humiliation. What has happened, thus far, isn't really cuckolding. It's Claire being a cheater and dismantling Dan's emotional mental health in the process. Zane and her are both not good people. I fully get the erotic nature of how this unfolded and the bet was the bet, but it sounds like Zane only wins when she leaves Dan for him... That is total submission. She is the prize, remember. I do hope there is a direction in which Claire and Dan can rekindle some of their marriage, but I feel like the sexual and mental damage is done. I do hope at some point she comes clean to Dan about what she did .. not gaslight him.

Mark Albright

Seems like this chapter moves us away from the ending instead of towards it. Too Silver-like for me.

Deprivedone

This chapter was pretty tame and short and all the options for the next chapter feel very meh.

Tiggy

i dont see how this gets Claire on the porn site.

DatGuy

Cumming from a blowjob!?🥵 Really fun good stuff. Reconciling with with Dan I'm not sure about. Will they both be truthful? Is it to setup a guilt free submission to Zane and an ending where everyone is happy? The Hottie in the Mirror had a break up and reconciling so I'll have to read that to try to predict your angle.

LB

None of the options seem plausible. Caleb, he hardly seemed alpha and would most likely just deliver her back to Zane. Same with Periah, she’s not a fan of Claire and would much rather humiliate her and do Zane’s bidding. That leaves the most unlikely of all, going back to Dan. She knows he’s a cuckold so there’s no pay off there. Zane would know it was a matter of time before she caved and Dan would be all for it… so anyway I picked A as the best of a bad bunch.

Ross

Given your point at the start about looking to wrap this up, I went with B which could easily end with Dan telling her about the honeymoon. There are also elements of A and C that can be included where Claire cuts Zane off and Caleb shows up at her office anyways to look for work.

Pulos

I picked A, I'll always choose the option that I think reduces Dan's role in the story, the character just annoys me.

Tony Midwood

I think rekindling the relationship with Dan is an amazing direction — but it has to be done with real heart. She can’t win him back with sex or empty promises; it needs to be something meaningful, something rooted in who they were together. And with Christmas around the corner, the timing could be perfect. Dan genuinely believes it’s over. So there he is, standing alone at the edge of the ice-skating rink, watching families glide across the ice. It’s the same place he and his wife went every Christmas Eve — their tradition, their sanctuary — and the memories sting. He lets them wash over him: her laughter echoing over the ice, her hands cold in his until they warmed inside his coat, the way she’d always pretend to fall just so he’d catch her. His trance is suddenly broken when a little girl stops in front of him. She presses a small, neatly wrapped present into his hand before bursting into giggles and sprinting back toward the crowd. Confused, Dan turns the box over, hesitating — and then he opens it. Whatever’s inside hits him so hard that he instinctively brings a hand to his mouth. Tears blur his vision. Maybe it’s a photo. Maybe a letter in her handwriting. Maybe a tiny charm only the two of them would recognise. Whatever it is, it’s them. He lifts his head, searching — and that’s when he sees her. Standing across the rink, walking slowly toward him. No drama, no rehearsed speech, just raw hope in her eyes.

Hannah Baird

CALEB PLEASE. Let's give Claire some options here. Give her a bit more agency. Where it goes/collapses from there, who knows? Either way, this series continue to be incredible. The fact that the community defines the contours of the narrative and empowers them, is incredibly alien to me. But, in action, so, SO cool. Vote with your hearts! And uhh...the other things! >_<

Randy T

I voted for B, though not particularly enamored with the alternate tattoo/henna for Dan path - maybe a piercing with a "D" could be a different option? Has the added benefit of Zane either wanting to replace it... or at least change it to a little "d" ;) If not B, I think A works better than C at this stage. C just seems like a whole new side path imo

Marlberg

All tied up at 33%

Donovan

I picked B. The story and this particular chapter was a good read but it maybe starting to feel off track if we add Caleb to the scene. I think circling back to include Dan and his thoughts about his recent denial from Claire, along with his continuous porn addiction to Zane’s website. Claire attempting to resume a normal life but struggling to be satisfied. Zane plotting his next move while there is some space between him and Claire. The story overall seems to be approaching it’s end focusing on the 3 and a few side character leah, bill, perlah would feel natural. Idk idk I’m no story teller lol

Terminal Itch

C


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