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Pilot Chapter 1: Finishing School
🕑 Added 2025-12-27 20:01:51 +0000 UTCMorning Everyone!
I've been busily working away at the next part of the Bet, but I felt really inspired by the voting on my next project, so I decided to bang out the first "Pilot Chapter" for you!
The top vote-getter of the poll about my next project was Finishing School, and this short chapter is designed to give you a taste of what the story may have to offer.
The way I approached these pilot chapters is a little different than just writing the beginning of the story. Usually, the beginnings of stories have a lot of scene-setting and exposition, and I wanted these short samples to dive right in to something sexy.
So in other words, this is a sexy scene that is close to the beginning of the story, but not the very beginning of where the story will start if I write it. I also assume that the scene may be modified a bit if this story is the final winner to account for other plot elements I introduce. For example, I assume at this point in the story, I will have introduced some supporting characters amongst the students, and will want to show their reactions to the scene as it takes place.
Anyway, over the next few weeks, I will present a few more "pilot chapters", and then hold a final vote for the winning story!
Be sure to comment on what you liked or didn't like about this one to sway other voters!
Comments
taletalent
I really appreciate your creative and interesting writing. As someone whose native language is not English, I am having trouble translating the stories you upload in PDF format. Could you simply upload the files the way you upload them in the story "The Bet"? Thanks in advance
drater
Let me start off by saying that that the story line was in my top 3 to choose from. That being said, I didn't like the scene all that much. Here are three things I just can't believe and my solutions. #1 St Anthony's dress code is to have panties with the word slut on them. Since this is college, I could see a sorority initiation making her wear the slut panties and Macy has to sit in the front row and flash the teacher. #2 A teacher reads out loud in his class how many cocks have you sucked. Again, I go to a sorority initiation where Macy gets asked this question and the other girls think she is lying so as punishment they spank her. The initiation is recorded and videotaped and is given to the teacher. #3 Spanking a student at her age in front of the hole class. The teacher being a warped individual and having something on the girls in the sorority made the girls video tape the initiation. Now he has something he can use against Macy and with Macy having to flash the teacher as part of her initiation is called into his office where he shows her the recording. He is sitting next to her and as they watch the recording, he starts asking her questions about the initiation and sees she is starting to get turned on by what she is seeing and with what he is asking her. He asks Macy if she is getting excited and she lies and says no but he doesn't believe her and snakes his hand in between her thighs up to her pussy where she is soaked. He whispers that she is a bad girl and will have to be spanked. Of course, all of this is being recorded and will be used against her later.
