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Chapter 1921
🕑 Added 2021-11-20 22:49:44 +0000 UTCComments
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter.
Nicholas F
the connection between and Delilah > the connection between him and Delilah
Doubt > doubted
PuDDleS4263
I read a present tense novel right before writing. It def messes me up
Gardor
When RG "comes back to his body" from the Sea of Dreams, wasn't the Sea of Dreams on the dark side of the moon? Was he astrally projecting?
David C
There were a lot of incorrect tenses (i.e. “is/has” when it should be “was/had”) in these last two chapters
Chris
through a ropes course -through a rope course
Chris
tired of tacking their-tired of taking their
nethernight11
Thanks for the chapters
Darune Albane
The ending ... pulled heartstrings
PuDDleS4263
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