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Chapter 1920
🕑 Added 2021-11-20 22:46:38 +0000 UTCComments
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two guards' were frozen --> two guards were frozen the guards' in the poker game --> the guards in the poker game his skin begins to sizzle --> began bearing small portion --> bearing a small portion "keeping himself focused was a bit fraught" - fraught with danger? can't just use 'fraught' by itself or did you mean to use another word there?
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter.
Nicholas F
"To let the shape he scrubbed away " should be "To let the shape *be* scrubbed away"
nethernight11
Thanks for the chapter
Nathan Emerson
I kind of want to see a chapter where randidly is sleeping and someone sneaks up to attack him and their attacks do nothing to him.
WickedlyDesigned
Please check the tenses, you have a bunch of sentences in present tense mixed in with the usual past tense.
PuDDleS4263
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