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Chapter 1934

🕑 Added 2021-12-08 07:27:48 +0000 UTC

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Benji

Have not said it yet, but if you are going for Randy as a enbie character then I am so here for it and love it so much! I hope they actually get Bethyl to use their pronouns, unless it's she/they? I'm not sure if it was intended, but Bethyl calling Durro Darro makes me think that it's similar of her not realizing about Randy. Still, living this so much! Thanks for this wonderful epic tale!

nethernight11

Thanks for the chapter

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Geozstevenzz

I thought Randy was a boy. Did you confuse the gender midway? Also, I am really waiting for the following major curiosities to be followed through: 1. The relationship between Elhume and his wife 2. The crowned nether king and his plans 3. What the pinnace actually is 4. The real reason Elhume goes to such extents to prevent people from getting to the pinnacle 5. The guy at the bottom of the nether shaft (underneath the floating body parts) 6. Elhume's thoughts and introspections around the nexus, its citizens and Randidly's activities 7. The third tier citizens and the gods and monsters within them 8. The fate that befelll Shal 9. The fate of the pinnacle seekers that made it through the door 10. The final war with Elhume and what Randidly's alternative to Elhume's solution will be 11. The purpose of the phoenix image 12. Randy's role in all this 13. The insane chic with Randidly's blood in the nexus Your's truly, Checkhovs gun Otherwise keep it up, loving the story

Kevin M

On their back, they could smell pine needs and cinnamon. > On their back, they could smell pine needles and cinnamon.

Radangus

i agree that it is confusing to read, probably because i haven’t read in that type of narrative voice before

Chris

What is going on with the they, their, them stuff? If this is an attempt at appeasing the pronoun gangs please stop. It doesn't make sense. It is hard enough in real life but in literature, it just doesn't work. It is weird enough that you made Randy a girls name. The pronouns stuff simply wouldn't survive in a survival scenario.

PuDDleS4263

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