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Chapter 1916

🕑 Added 2021-11-16 05:45:00 +0000 UTC

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Geozstevenzz

I just bought the audible and the book. collectors item. gonna listen to them on my drives to and from work. gonna love this

Kevin M

Mrs. Hamilton spoke slowly, tapping her fingers against the table glass table. > Mrs. Hamilton spoke slowly, tapping her fingers against the glass table.

Charble

Way to snag richard kadrey for the audible version. I loved him in the sandman slim series

Alexander Dupree

feeling something between annoyance and embarrassment. -> chagrin seems pretty close. Just a suggestion though.

Alexander Dupree

Mrs. Hamilton opened her mouth, but she paused and closed it as Tatiana began to speak. “It’s more complicated than that. The best answers with Nether are vague; by drawing a connection to someone, you are weaving them into the fabric of your narrative. In this case, the metaphor still works. When you have a story with too many threads of equal importance, you end up pissing off everyone who wants more stage time for the thread they want to know about. The result is shit. Randidly can get away with it because his central story is absolutely overwhelming; the rest of us will quickly become overshadowed with consequences we might not see coming.” Kek

Jemini

In regards to this friend's book, their writing style very clearly delves deep into the "purple prose" territory. You might want to tell them that, because I (and several other literary savvy people) find that to be a large turn-off.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Fullfirewall

I'm loving the depths to the original 4's images and abilities

nethernight11

Thanks for the chapter

Geozstevenzz

first one here

PuDDleS4263

Friend's Book: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B09FY3YCDV

PuDDleS4263

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