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Chapter 1885

🕑 Added 2021-10-06 06:06:15 +0000 UTC

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Jemini

While I agree about the issues brought up, I do not agree about the urging to re-write immediately. We understood the beginning and end of the chapter. That's enough for us to move on to the next chapter. Puddles edits his chapters before they get to the 1 week from public posting stage. So, all he really has to do is make a note on this chapter that there's an issue that he should come back to later.

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

EnigmaticOne

"So if that heart is the core of the flesh titan, Acri scored a deep cut across a metal plate seeping out of the thing’s torso only a small fraction of time before the strike ground up the surface. He steadily narrowed the distance. Then Randidly fled, flaring a blast of gravity from the Stillborn Phoenix to escape unscathed. What is the vulnerable portion of Wick’s image?" A lot of this doesn't make sense.. It says he narrowed the distance after the strike but what for? And then dodged without any mention of what the giant did to make him dodge? This part is just very awkward.

IceTea

Quality of this chapter was honestly terrible. I would reccomend a rewrite before working on any others. The action was stilted and confusing, feels like there are whole sequences missing.

drag0nreb0rn

Excessive masterbation is known to cause wrist pain.

ThePolarParadox

Family goes beyond mere blood and magical rusted chains of madness and utter chaos, I guess.

ThePolarParadox

Kids, amiright? :P

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Jemini

Wait... so, Randidly is currently in the process of killing Wick without merging with him by the normal ritual process. And yet... Devick already considers him her son? Even though, other than the unborn duo, he currently has no part of her in his being? Can't account for crazy I suppose. I should have realized it before. Devick is deliberately designed to defy all attempts at predicting what she might do next. (That said, I'm still going to make predictions about her, just to point out what the most reasonable action for her to do next according to the pattern might be. I'm not sure if Puddles has been taking my predictions into account, but if he has then I guess I can be helpful by allowing him to avoid Devick defying her character and suddenly becoming predictable.)

Kary_PL

He wants to kill Wick at any cost. He won't be able to function properly without that.

nethernight11

Thanks for the chapter

David Robb

Too bad for Devick that Expira has already been moved away.

Gardor

Didn't RG essentially win as soon as the foundation of the melding got rekt? Like if he'd just walked away, the images would have ripped each other apart