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Chapter 1851

🕑 Added 2021-08-29 05:41:55 +0000 UTC

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dood

Nether running with -> Nether running wild Steam hissed out his nose -> Steam hissed out of his nose ...interaction of patterns because... -> interaction of patterns became "This feel..." -> this feels? or this feeling?

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Paradox Grim

Guess he's firin' his laZ0r

Chris

Anime stories without the anime aren't that interesting to me. DBZ would have been horrible as a novel.

Gardor

I don't care that the numbers that define the six sub-energies of nether went up, I don't care that he pulled a stat upgrade out of his ass, I don't care that he killed some random section of jungle and a bit of the sky. I've seen't it all before, randidly grits his teeth and a laser happens, woo hoo. Meh.

David Trainor

Your writing never ever disappoints!

SunderGoldmane

Can we please get a small POV change from someone looking at this storm on the horizon and then it taking a break and then coming back 10x and then a big beacon of plasma shooting up from it?

SunderGoldmane

If you aren’t reading this story the way you watch anime, I feel bad for you son.

Idan tal

So is it “R used roar” or “R used hyperbeam “? Anyway it was super effective!

Chris

A bit anime right?

Chris

Just so you know. You were repeating phrases a lot in that chapter. Like the phrase "around him" was used 8 times.

Luke Scheffe

Never mind, I misread the chapter.

Chris

Nether running with around him-Nether running around him

nethernight11

Thanks for the chapter

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Luke Scheffe

So, is he going to evolve Reaction? It mentioned vibrating his brain stem apart, and that’s where reactions usually occur, based on my(admittedly limited) grasp of biology.

Gardor

Meh

Alexander Dupree

Woah cool.

PuDDleS4263

Corrections


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