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Chapter 1793
🕑 Added 2021-06-16 04:36:21 +0000 UTCComments
Trebuchet
Are all these high powered people obgyn’s or what lol. Please change that before it goes to print. Webster definition: “an instrument inserted into a body passage especially to facilitate visual inspection or medication. “ So either all these people are tools for vaginal examination or you need to change it.
Zarik0
This is a little hugh for the last 100 chapter are basically all about claudette, claudette here and here is zzz, does she even matter? why she so prominant now? why be so involved in her when she "useless" in his much more multiple priority goal and she doesnt really matter in the end, after killing knight Helen character i feel we get a repeat (and bad) of her here with claudette now, its a little zzz because they are no real basis for her becoming so prominant in the story, her starting intro for her getting in the story are a little miss in my view, the writting after is perfect, but with the lacking starting basis its a little meh, same thing with our MC lover who come out of nowhere with no real basis, feel forced
hope22
is Randidly ever going to fix his arm
nethernight11
Thanks for the chapters
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter.
Corwin Amber
'Not that he was' -> 'Not now that he was' OR that -> when
SunderGoldmane
WOHOO!!!
SunderGoldmane
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Corwin Amber
'Not that he was' -> 'Not now that he was' OR that -> when
Alexander Dupree
Thanks for the chapters
PuDDleS4263
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