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Chapter 1738
🕑 Added 2021-04-20 05:32:11 +0000 UTCComments
Jack McDowell
"His Scrawl was flexible impressive"?
saba baratashvili
Where is ghost?
SunderGoldmane
I’m not sure neveah fits into the function of “subordinate”.
Umut Numanoglu
Why not Neveah? Doesn't she have a super strong body? Does she not want to?
Slim Dakhch
i barely read the last chapter, i felt like i didnt care about those characters till helen gets her funeral, plz dont drag it out . otherwise great story as always.
nethernight11
Thanks for the chapters
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter.
SunderGoldmane
*sigh* I’m not looking forward to who is going to fill hellens role, I did think Vant was a likely candidate. Feel like it just won’t be the same unless somehow shal ends up serving him. Spear attendant was a very Tellus thing and not sure any other characters could capture that. Still excited for what you do with this vacancy left by Helen.
SunderGoldmane
“Even moment allowed” “Every moment allowed”
SunderGoldmane
“Ever moment was a new twinge” “Every moment was a new twinge”
SunderGoldmane
“A dozen and then a hundred and then a hundred finger size” One extra hundred?
SunderGoldmane
“Base operations remained functioned” “Base operations remained function(ing/al)”
SunderGoldmane
“Strange goblin withdrew the saw” “Strange goblin (and/then) withdrew the saw”
George Hicken
> !!!1 !!!!
Chris
spun mind air - spun mid-air
PuDDleS4263
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