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Chapter 1659

🕑 Added 2021-01-26 06:31:49 +0000 UTC

Comments

Azeroth

The transition from the last chapter to this one was very abrupt. I thought I had accidentally skipped a chapter at first

Subliminary

IMO him placing the planets in the alpha cosmos don’t need an entire mini arc or something dedicated to it. The promise was relatively inconsequential plot wise originally. This isn’t the biggest deal and honestly the shade incorporated Expira into the Cosmos in what...3 chapters? Other plot lines are more interesting than seeing “Randidly tried and failed, then tried 10 times more with a NEW more creative method as he pushed his willpower further until his emerald eyes shone green like dragon fire.” lmao

Afrisan

Hey puddles, I’m a longtime fan and supporter, but I feel like you’ve rushed over some pretty important stuff these two chapters (1659 and 1660). Would have been nice to spend a minute on expira and actually hear from them rather than gloss over it, and the next chapter suffers from the same issue of quick change I was almost worried you would just say - he managed to put the planet in his cosmos in one chapter and moved on