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Chapter 1593

🕑 Added 2020-11-24 05:18:25 +0000 UTC

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SunderGoldmane

I’m glad I got to see the ghosthound come into his own as a leader.

Primordial might and physique to break the system

Umut Numanoglu

She could feel how tense how they all were. -> (remove second how)

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

nethernight11

Thanks for the chapter

Right now, I understand many things. I understand the aether, the tree, the beast, and mc. I don't understand nether, karma, and the weight. As far as I can gather, Nether is outside emotion about you, aether is your emotion, and karma is how they connect. But what that means is vague. Aether means that your emotions are strong enough to change yourself/your surroundings. Does that mean nether is that other's emotions change you? This desperately needs more expansion. Perhaps a path that lets there be new energy? The culmination of aether, nether, and karma? Another thing worth expansion is the weight. What is it? What does it want? How does it get what it wants? The beast and tree, I understand. they want stability. The beast changes himself; the tree changes the surroundings. This has aether down pat. What about the weight. I think it wants to be more. That's why it is eating and gathering and imposing weight and pressure. But what does that allow mc to do? The weight could be another "side" of RG, or it could be more. Maybe, a path that allows the weight to be a "nether" image? A mirror of the other images? It could embody what mc wants to become instead of what he is. A mix of these two options would be best. A new energy that the weight can control. I want to (or want to become a person who) feel these things. I want (or want to become a person who) you to feel that way about me. I want to be (or want to become a person who would be) with these people. That would be the best. It would also get rid of the stupid "Images are reflections of you" thing in fiction that I hate. That would be the next "energy," too. Paths that could lead to this (also spit-takes on possible effects): Aether Convergence/Greater Nether Core(Nether Convergence) lines (could result in the new energies.) Exodus, The Terror/Genisis, the considered (The fear of leaving the system to make new/ The beginning of new things only thought about(LIKE MIXING THE ENERGIES)) The Passion sans Shape (maybe mc wanting more strength so much he makes formless new energy by mixing aether nether karma right?) Emotional Artisan (Could start to show new ways of using emotions of aether nether karma) Conviction of the Celestial Cataclysm (your will that could break galaxies, forges ahead of system intended paths, and makes new energy) The Trace of the Ideal (Could show that emotions don't have to reflect what is, but could reflect what could be(Tracing the perfect you into an emotion)) Physique to Break the System(Mind to Break the System, Emotions to Break the System) (Could start to break free of the system and instead of making and using aether, start using new energies) Glimpse of the Shallah (Could start to show the "will of g-d", g-d's perfect energy, or that will of g-d is your will (shallah means will of g-d or g-d's will (according to urban dictionary also means being bipolar social or bipolar intellectual(shy sometimes, sometimes not. smart sometimes, sometimes not))) The Shadow beyond the threshold (could tell about new enemy beyond aether, nether(LIKE MAYBE A MIX OF THE ENERGIES)) Personal path choices narrowed to 5: Aether Convergence II (either this or nether core will move story quick.) Greater Nether Core (either this or Aether convergence will move story quick.) Mantle of the Patron /The Ashes of Ulaat, Patron of Ash ( wanna see mc become g-d like in all eastern light novels.) Ashes of Illym, the Above-Average Child (Story reasons, a.k.a. I want more lore) Mysteries of the Fiery Emerald Waltz (hopefully bring back spears(you know, the FIRST THING THE MC TRAINED?)) Weakness of the Stillborn Phoenix (I wanna know more about the weight) Trace of the Ideal (will hopefully let mc plan out his future strength instead of "pick path, ooh 5% more fire dmg" (not something author would make, but most videogame, book paths are like that) Top 1 and my pick for the polls: Trace of the Ideal (as I said before, hopefully, it will show mc what to do next instead of what is next and let mc become more himself) P.S. Sorry for the college thesis. TLDR; VOTE TRACE OF THE PERFECTION, THE ONLY HONEST POLITICIAN. (author, Idk how many more hints I can give you, about future plot, but if you need any more just call me.) P.P.S. Like seriously author, I kinda just gave you a way to milk like 2-3 more years of money out of these Patreon suckers from this story alone. P.P.P.S If you find something here insulting, it is a joke. otherwise, tell me if you agree, disagree, think my opinions are uninformed, etc. P.P.P.P.S. Like for real tho auth-

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