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Chapter 1558

🕑 Added 2020-10-21 05:26:28 +0000 UTC

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Will, of the convictions forge.

For some reason people don't see progress here and yet... I find this inspiring. It is a part of your story that holds impossibility in its hand. It is the center and core of your story and all the reason I'm here for.

Will, of the convictions forge.

Dauntless would be proud

Jbles

I'm really liking where this might go.

vagae056

I hope this is sarcasm

hi angus

i agree, these past chapters feel like nothing have happened, but the funny thing is even puddle’s worst chapters still are amazing and interesting to read. this chapter had me hooked even though basically nothing happens

drag0nreb0rn

Dude. You make 6700 a month from writing this story. This is your job. Pump out some chapters. We expect a lot because you have set the bar so high. I understand that you may need time to figure out the path forward but 5 or less a week is not what the patrons are paying for.

Luke Preston

Thank you hope you have a good break You deserve it

roflvaliant

I'm getting major Evil Dead vibes from this one. I'm loving it!

ElReaping

I'm digging it hard, it's nice to see an actual change in Randy's emotions, thought process and perspective beyond "train, train, train"

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Aiden

If your critique dissuades those you give it to, you’ve failed as a critic. This is just an unneeded complaint that your expectations aren’t being met, not really helpful

Aiden

I feel that one of these should be above “But instead of those slippery grey beings below, the attack came from below.”

Gnossos

Honestly a whole bunch of nothing happened here. 0 development.

Amir Tal

So again you give less results. And this time because you need to prepare for your days off. Seriously with the extra time you had you should have had a stack of extra chapters to release when you need time off. You are sitting on an average of 7 chapters a week. Compared to when you released 11 chapters, you should have a lot of free time on your hands