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Chapter 1531

🕑 Added 2020-09-23 05:15:53 +0000 UTC

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Will, of the convictions forge.

Thanks for the eggs

drag0nreb0rn

I am legitimately enjoying reading Rand being a hard ass. Please keep him this way towards the people of the Nexus.

InsaneHyde

"As he lifted the unfortunate soul of the ground" of to off.

nethernight11

Thanks for the chapter

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Kevin Mendoza

Helping the ground stabilize => Helping to ground and stabilize. Or pick one adjective since both are synonymous and using both here is potentially a unnecessary form of repetition.

Kevin Mendoza

And from the behavior of “the” Nether

Kevin Mendoza

Wow another Kevin M here on this paetreon, neat.

Kevin Mendoza

Drops of preparation => Drops of perspiration/sweat . Instead

pukeofhurl

one part of the skill was called the shade.... and he produced a black armour... sooo perhaps his skill that let him avoid... lets him become immaterial now... and the armour is probably the result of the emotions he was trapping in his body creating like scales internally from the image that he was doing with the thing in the deep hole

Kevin Mendoza

Which of us “is” the head drill sergeant.

Kevin M

I have always enjoyed your writing but lately it feels like your writing has really stepped up, especially when describing interactions with Randidly. I can feel the tension as I read and it’s fantastic