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Chapter 1505

🕑 Added 2020-08-29 12:45:18 +0000 UTC

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SunderGoldmane

“The certainty Randidly conveyed to him about this...” I’m not sure who or what the subject is in this sentence or if I’m just red eyed and missing what’s being said.

SunderGoldmane

“...staring at the elf with all the enthusiasm [[as/of]] a dog owner...”

SunderGoldmane

“Reputation proceeds you” I think the word you meant was precede? Like “to go before”?

SunderGoldmane

“his eyes moving back and forth [[between]] Octavius and Randidly...”

PrimalShadow

Shouldn't be have T2 citizenship, not T1?

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

nethernight11

Thanks for the chapter

Grammarmelade

He had been walking past an entire Nexus that [he] hadn’t even been able to notice.

Corwin Amber

'forth Octavius' -> 'forth across Octavius'

Corwin Amber

' that layover' layover -> lay over

Killer Pickle

Thanks for the chapter man and your such a tease with every release, you just make us want more haha. And one final thing, take care of yourself man like for real.

PuDDleS4263

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