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Chapter 1501
🕑 Added 2020-08-25 04:30:47 +0000 UTCComments
Will, of the convictions forge.
Thanks for the eggs
SunderGoldmane
“...as the Head Drill Instructor in order to earn merits [[was/while]] the Nexus military...”
SunderGoldmane
“Certainly, he would gain a lot of power [[but/by]] getting there, but someday, would the purity of his power draw Aether to him and crystallize it around him...? ((I think someday should be moved to the end of the sentence, but grammar isn’t my thing, just typos.))
SunderGoldmane
“A pi[[e]]ce of Elhume to stave off the whole.”
Christopher Sigurdson
I agree, but with all the nether time dilation it could work out
Notmyskittles
3000 years seems short for the breadth of history and size of the nexus. Im sure it was mentioned a few times earlier in the story but 300000 years or more would seem more accurate
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter.
nethernight11
Thanks for the chapter
Alexander Dupree
A pice of Elhume to stave off the whole -> piece
Corwin Amber
'merits was the Nexus' was -> as
PuDDleS4263
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