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Chapter 1510
🕑 Added 2020-09-03 04:57:42 +0000 UTCComments
Will, of the convictions forge.
Thanks for the eggs
SunderGoldmane
“...hadn’t yet realized the joyous experience//ed of being trained by me.”
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter. Really enjoying this arc.
Christopher Sigurdson
Ugggh this arc is amazing. I need moooore. Thanks for the boot camp eggs
David C
“He was only on a small hill above the vast trench” —> should be a “standing” between only and on
EnigmaticOne
I'm loving this so much. Maybe some of these characters will be helpful to Randidly in the future. Maybe he'll help them. I'm hoping both. Also, Randidly was such a badass in this chapter. I'm just loving all the imagery contained in this chapter honestly. Raymund is very interesting to me. The fire elemental is my close second. I just love the idea of a pure-hearted badass fire elemental.
JTP
God damn is this arc scratching ALL of my itches. RG the drill instructor is perfect, Helen is amazing, Heiffal is wonderful, and the recruit's reactions are sublime.
Krazy Kanaka
"realized the joyous experienced of" - should be experience
Krazy Kanaka
"watched the recruits matches" - needs an apostrophe on recruits
nethernight11
Thanks for the chapter
Alexander Dupree
Helen's encouragement is perfect
PuDDleS4263
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