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Chapter 1507

🕑 Added 2020-09-02 04:17:41 +0000 UTC

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SunderGoldmane

“A young man with extremely pale skin shivered //at// as the fire elemental spoke.”

Jamarr

Ooo, this is gonna be good!

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

InsaneHyde

"But then Techetadore had born." Replace had with was or change "had been born"

Augustus

'Congratulations, you three. Your chance' -> 'Congratulations, you four. Your chance'

Corwin Amber

'Two individual stood' individual -> individuals

Corwin Amber

'shivered at as' -> 'shivered as'

nethernight11

Thanks for the chapter

curtis hall

Thanks for the chapter

PuDDleS4263

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