Chapter 1482
🕑 Added 2020-08-03 22:08:28 +0000 UTCComments
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter.
James Heney
So the lesson is dont trust anyone even supposed friends and allies?
Subliminary
To try and prove he’s not all powerful as he seems I suppose
Adam Roundfield
Guessing that the dossier making it so clear how he has a bad habit of never staying prepared for an ambush, they decided to teach him a lesson to remedy that and help him survive the Nexus...
Choboman
Dont understand what they gain from this?
Grammarmelade
the ambusher's hesitated -> the ambushers hesitated
Killer Pickle
Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one and I really hope Randidly teaches them a lesson on their stupidity and how bad they have treated him as a friend in particular
Idan tal
Awesome fight 🤩🤩🤩
Corwin Amber
'would from Hank’s bullet' would -> wound
Corwin Amber
'Alana was their' their -> there
Kevin Mendoza
I’m enjoying this battle.
Demitrius Fogle
Lmao randidly really bout to fuck them up 😂 they think they know everything he been through Helen wasn’t on the front lines so she has no idea about any of that or really about anything leading up to the fight woth the auto arch dude she only really knows about the competition and she might know he was strong enough to survive against the fire speared dude but other than that she only knows that randidly is strong. Even if he just uses grim chimera I can’t see him losing this fight at all, especially since nether is a huge part of grim chimeras power too
Kevin Mendoza
Maybe that a little unrealistic, maybe that “is” a little unrealistic instead.
Kevin Mendoza
Which meant the would from hanks bullet. Wound instead of would.
Kevin Mendoza
Drops of blood fell from the Ghosthound. Ghosthound’s instead.
Kevin Mendoza
In the dirt ground. Correction pick a noun using both is almost gibberish.
Kevin Mendoza
Flames flared to “an” even greater. Missing “an”
Kevin Mendoza
Alanas holy image stuck, struck instead.
Kevin Mendoza
Then Alana was thier, there instead.
Kevin Mendoza
Above his glendal, delete the word his
Cadastral
"well, maybe that a little unrealistic right now." --> "maybe that is" or "that may be"
David C
Thanks for the chapters! Great fight so far
PuDDleS4263
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