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Chapter 1398
🕑 Added 2020-05-07 05:20:13 +0000 UTCComments
Will, of the convictions forge.
I really love the concept of images being weak to other images. Is like those games where water is weak to fire and fire is weak to rock.
Misery
I thought he used his Earthquake skill when he stamped his foot. I wonder what will eventually become of it.
nethernight11
Thanks for the eggs
Joshua Little
Corrections: A pulse of energy spread out from his chest. His fingers tingled. The aura of life- ??? did something get half deleted or something here? I'm not sure if "His fingers tingled" really makes a full sentence... Even with his weakened image, as long as he had a few moments to recover- ???? if these dashes are abrupt changes in thought you need to put something after them or they look like half written sentences.
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter.
