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Chapter 1414

🕑 Added 2020-05-22 05:58:59 +0000 UTC

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Will, of the convictions forge.

Annon, ma boy. It is good to see he did grow up to represent the spirit of tellus

Elaborate

Hmmm... If there's any critique I have of the writing in tLoRG, it's that every bombastic character has basically the same voice. I'm like, "Oh, another unfortunate possession by the wandering ghost of Roger Kingsley..." Maybe if you change the laugh from "heh heh" to "hohoho" or "Hah!" or "Teeheehee" depending on character, the rest would follow from that?

agentjongon

That’s so funny that Lucretia kept the Tellus flag tradition. Love it

Alexander Dupree

Hey puddles to the author note. People are haters. Write what you want and what feels right. I like all the little sub plots. If this were a real book I'd say focus on the main plot but it's not. If you want to continue the Rand main story it might be worth it to write offshoot stories like the AZ Healer Patreon. Other projects can be valuable to your creative voice.

Philip Pleiss

Delilah, meet Shal Jr.

Tommy Littlefield

That little girl will finally be taught some humility thank god

Chris

HAH... Delilah finally met a kid she can't bully. The big thing though is the kids don't know where they are. I really want them to find out and read the reactions. BTW what do the residents of AC call their world?