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Chapter 1223

🕑 Added 2019-11-30 06:14:04 +0000 UTC

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Michael Ox

Just a quick clarification, i mean who characters are in the sense of what they look like. In my mind I find my self defaulting back to thinking of them as humans excluding specific cases where their features mean something, for example, ill having feathers.

zeith

i sorta get where your coming from but if he does reflect on who people are to often it will feel like hes fluffing the chapters and people who aren't reading it as he releases and are reading it in chunks will likely be annoyed the thing i would love is rands character sheet from the last chapter it was shown to be somewhere easily accessible i have trouble finding the last chapter we saw it in maybe (sheet) label in the index or something. and regarding karma I don't think puddles has ever used it as a all powerful source from the way i see it, it is like aether or nether most characters have no way to influence those forces either just like karma but it is interesting that it affects both aether and nether makes me wonder if it is sorta a neutral power. and rand cock blocks himself with responsibility i like that though cause i would not like it if he ended up like his father and had to leave his family although for different reasons.

InsaneHyde

Karma "limits Randidly from ever having a relationship he isn't fully invested in? " Where the heck did that idea come from? If anything I believe Randidly's personally itself is the biggest cockblocker against himself. He can't stop moving forward toward his goal(s). And from what I remember karma hasn't had a clear cut definition of what it is. Just ideas of how people think it works.

Michael Ox

Please remind us of what things are Puddles. Your are 1200 chapters into a story and I have difficulty remembering what all the portions of your story are. I have trouble remembering the features of specific characters like miln and illeot, when you only mention them once in this epic you are writing. Following up on that, I barely remember how Karma works, let alone why it matters so much in this instance. In context it doesn't have the same power that literal power has, but is somehow all powerful and limits Randidly from ever having a relationship he isn't fully invested in? Out of context, its another wild power you have introduced that has no clear explanation without me going back 600 chapters to go find the original explanation. The story leaves no context for someone who may have forgotten a detail, and to me is becoming a story of fill in the blanks. Why does Karma matter, why should it make sense in terms of the system, and how is it not a cheap narrative weapon. Reading this is becoming exhausting.

Bearrito

Randidly used "reflect on your actions". It was super effective!

Slim Dakhch

i love it

awreeohs

yes. he duplicated the world and re-lived his life in fear of this battlefield, and his new interactions with vualla allowed her to become this dark, twisted thing.

Adam Roundfield

They say that a sergeant in motion outranks an officer who has no idea what is going on. And an explosive ordinance technician at a full sprint outranks everybody.

Amir Tal

didn't feel like a double chap, it ended so fast :(

saba

So the serpent dark Vualla was the first duplicate Elliot made?

Bob

"... Or it's a key all the time, and when you stick it in people, it unlocks their death." ~~Caboose, RVB.

s476

ok I did not expect that, finally a worthy use for that skill! thanks for the chapter

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

ElectricintheForest

What a surprising solution from Ghosthound! Look at how our boy has grown!

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapter


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