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Chapter 1213

🕑 Added 2019-11-21 21:22:40 +0000 UTC

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thaughton2

This is a necro post, but the description makes sense, it pretty clear that to state it more plainly, the nether construct is "profoundly attention grabbing" he's using more adjectives to emphasize it's living, flowing nature.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Alex Anderson

What makes you say it is badly written? I understood it to mean that as the process of making the new nether core proceeded, if randidly actually focused on it, there's so much going on with it that he felt he wouldn't be able to stop or do other things. Only word I might remove is 'singular'

ParoxysmDK

A lot of the descriptions in this chapter made very little sense when read. An example of what i mean: "but it possessed the curious, singular property of devouring attention that was given to it too directly", this sentence is so badly written that it feels like a translated sentence in a Chinese xian xia.


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