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Chapter 975

🕑 Added 2019-05-21 05:46:29 +0000 UTC

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Corwin Amber

'wanted simply build' -> 'wanted to simply build' or 'wanted simply to build'

jailbreak

'a low slow' -> Here I'm quite uncertain, but I believe slow isn't the right word here. I could be wrong, but I think it probably should be something more along the lines of 'a low/slow slope', unless I'm completely mistaken that is. 'several acidic toads' -> I believe this should be 'frogs', not 'toads'? 'more Howler monkeys' -> howler 'no addition engravings' -> additional 'were rather high' -> missing a period after 'high' 'mostly intact So Randidly ' -> missing a period after 'intact'

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Chris

Domes, domes everywhere....


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