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Chapter 972

🕑 Added 2019-05-19 07:05:06 +0000 UTC

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jailbreak

'While the constant water dripping' -> 'With'? 'calamitous arrival in rumbled in fury.' -> and rumbled in fury 'Skill or attack his an opponent' -> hits 'Because his the amount of damage' -> Remove 'his' 'to be harvested me so badly' -> by me

Corwin Amber

'harvested me so badly' -> harvested by me so badly

Nodlehs

I just realized no one @ Erickson Steel made a single mention of his metal arm. Seems kinda odd for no one to say/ask anything.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.


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