Vyjalanas
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Last months comic update
🕑 Added 2024-01-11 23:16:53 +0000 UTCI only have two pages left and they are more then half done! Will finish it tomorrow, then I'll start new stuff for this month!!!
If someone could check my grammar, that'd be appreciated :X
Btw, January will get last months update in a couple of week, sry to make you wait, should get back on scheduled soon
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Marc
All of those are just my recommendations though, pick and choose if you want to use any of it ^^
Marc
Page 4: "Wha! Almost fell" You leave out I and he/she/they a lot, if that is on purpose to show that they don't actually say it and it is more of a description, ignore my comments ^_^ : "Wha! I almost fell" "Ok, guess I'll see you..." The I before guess in cases like this often gets dropped in daily conversation, like you did here. However I would recommend to add the "I" here, since if you just start with guess it could also mean you want the other to guess something, the difference in real life is easily conveyed in tone/context, but for a better reading experience I would go with: "Ok, I guess I'll see you..."
