Kinhasu
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💩Hasumi becomes a Septic Tank 蓮美は汚水槽になります
🕑 Added 2023-09-04 07:37:09 +0000 UTCHasumi becomes a Septic Tank Hi-res 高品質
Please let me know if there is any critical mistake in the english or grammar 😂
请告诉我如果有任何关于中文或语法的严重错误 😂
Comments
Kinhasu
Thank you for enjoying her enjoying herself :3 I appreciated the suggestion. I will keep them in mind when there is similar sentence in the future ^^ b
Knicklichtjedi
English text seems good! I enjoyed reading it as much as she enjoyed serving :D Only small note: Personally, I would order the words differently, but English is not my first language, so take it with a grain of salt. xD Option 1: "I quickly need to shit myself" Option 2: "I need to shit myself quickly"
昌夕姿
希望一個月能維持三張圖就好
Kinhasu
I guess that's only fair 😏
Breadman
Hopefully, Hasumi is able to return the favor one day by pooping on the other maids XD
Kinhasu
我应该只会更慢吧。我老了不像以前有那么多精力，而且我手指有职业病，我得小心点 www
昌夕姿
超硬，有中文版真的好 順帶得想個辦法讓老師更新的快一點
Kinhasu
非常感谢👍
Kinhasu
大部分也是用翻译的，然后自己改了点~哈哈🤣到底是缺了什么呢？
空空
中文语法没大问题，不过没有色色的感觉
柚木凉
画的超棒的，而且至少中文语法没问题😊
