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Sovereign of Wrath The Great Rewrite
🕑 Added 2023-07-30 21:13:46 +0000 UTCHere's that rewrite I promised, and despite the title, it only changes a single plot-significant event. Affected chapters (and chapter 124 even though I think there's only typo fixes) are attached. The major focus is on 119-120 and 125-126, though there are also significant edits to 121, 123, 139, and 141. See the attached pdfs. The chapters are also updated on SH/RR (through 131).
These changes bring SoW in line with my original draft, and I believe fix a major misstep to narrative flow and characterization of Zarenna. Let me know what you think!
